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Subject: Charcoal, 1994.

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Suna

Posts:259

08/23/2009 2:43 AM Alert 
It's 23x33 cm.'s. Made in 1994. Need some comments, please.





hollyga

Posts:186

08/30/2009 8:20 AM Alert 
Suna, I keep coming back to look at this one. I love your composition and your detail here. The vase and contents are your focal point so maybe you could draw them out a bit. My only suggestions would be to soften the reflection a bit then give more emphasis to the contents of the vase. I have really enjoyed seeing your older works and can certainly see your growth in them. Love your work!

Holland (hollyga)

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Suna

Posts:259

08/30/2009 9:09 AM Alert 
Thank you for your comments Holland. You are so right about the contents needing more emphasis. It's almost mixed with the background. Thank you.
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