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bassb8er
Posts:3

07/27/2008 3:38 PM Alert 

Hello

I am new to the network and would like to just post a picture to see how its done and get some feedback. I can take any sort of criticism so do not be shy about making your opinions known to me. I like to do widlife art, but am having trouble with the backgrounds and landscapes. I like to strive for realism in my work . Are there any books any of you would reccomend?

 

Thanks

Shane






Nancie
Posts:95

07/29/2008 11:56 AM Alert 
Hi Shane. I am not an experienced painter, so my opinion may be off. But from closeup photos I have done with nature, my subject is usually well-defined. The background is usually blurred. The light color leaves seem to have a hard line to them - I would probably make them less pronounced. This would help make the butterfly "pop" instead of the leaves competing for attention. Just a thought. Love your butterfly. What media are you using?
-Nan

"Art is not a thing, it is a way" - Elbert Hubbard
Nancie
Posts:95

07/29/2008 11:58 AM Alert 
Sorry, meant "what kind of acrylics?" are they liquid? Just wondering because of the fine lines & detail in the butterfly.

"Art is not a thing, it is a way" - Elbert Hubbard
bassb8er
Posts:3

07/29/2008 2:50 PM Alert 

Thanks for the critique, Nancie. I agree with you wholeheartedly. I think I should have blurred the background a little more. This is a painting I did for my wife cuz' she likes butterflies so I was sort of experimenting with some things als like trying to achieve realism with the leaves. I only use Liquitex acrylic paint right now. I am wanting to experience with some others though to see how they perform. I usually thin them out greatly with either some clean water or a thinning medium that also retards drying.

Thanks again for your comments

Shane

Eureka
Posts:34

09/03/2008 10:15 AM Alert 

Hi,

do keep painting as your use of color is very good. I agree with Nan that the butterfly should be more defined and the leaves more blurry like the photograph would be showing. But I love the colors and how they make your painting stand out. Really not a bad first attempt.

Ulrike


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mikec@pols

Posts:877

09/05/2008 6:07 AM Alert 
Very nice....one thing I would suggest is that you bring the butterfly up by darkening the background a bit...
Mike

"You either grow or regress...nothing stays the same...." (unknown)
"A man may fall several times in life, but he is not a failure until he says that he was pushed..."




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Maggie429

Posts:447

09/25/2008 9:55 AM Alert 
Very nice. Striking colours. I would question though, if you darkened the back, would you not loose a bit of the 'black outline' of the butterfly?

Mgi
www.hoviscreations.com
bassb8er
Posts:3

09/25/2008 8:24 PM Alert 

Thanks to everyone for their kind words and critique of my painting. I really appreciate the tips I have received. I do agree that the background should be  "fixed" but since I did this for my wife and she likes it I probably will not change anything. I may however, do another one and try the suggestions you all gave. Thanks again

Shane

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