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pastelmimigt

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06/05/2008 8:20 PM	Alert
Edit 6/7/08: I updated this painting to calm down the white lines. Also, the colors are more true. It's the second picture below. C&C's appreciated. Thanks. Michele *********************************** This is acrylic on 11x14 canvas. Please let me know what you think. Thanks. Michele

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Cara Bevan

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06/06/2008 2:10 AM	Alert
Very interesting! The color choice is great and the title is creative. I like it! The swarm of eyes makes you think and it draws you in. I'm tempted to count them and look about each one to see how they're different. My only thing would be that the white is a little overbearing, but that's just my opinion. It looks great with and without it. ^_^

"If Art isn't from the Heart, then is it Art at all?" ~Cara Bevan

pastelmimigt

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06/06/2008 11:52 AM	Alert
Hi Cara, Thank you for critiquing. I'm glad that it draws the viewer in. The white is what bothered me about this and I'm glad you commented on it. I'm going to try toning it down. Thanks again. Michele

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pastelmimigt

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06/07/2008 2:55 PM	Alert
I updated the painting and posted it below the original above. Please let me know what you think. Thanks! Michele

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