My Chorus, is doing a song which inspired me to try this. The lyrics start out " Small craft in a harbor that's still and serene__give no indication what their ways have been......They rock at their moorings allnestled in dreams...." it goes on  and actually gets better.

I'm still searching, and this is another leap into this impressionist urge I am feeling. I really appreciate the critiques by all of you that take the time.

Thanks