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Subject: Marchland

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Deedee

Posts:34

11/21/2007 5:08 PM Alert 

Hello everyone

 Been working on this painting and would like feedback from the group,,,

Della

 







Della
arl
Posts:30

11/22/2007 7:49 AM Alert 
Hi Della. I love the colours; particularly the colours in the sky. The aerial perspective seems to me a bit off as if the front land masses are tipping toward the viewer. You might want to try lightening/bluing the back of the 2 land maasses. (So there is no such word as "bluing". Arlene

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benmb
Posts:9

11/23/2007 7:00 PM Alert 
I'm not so sure about the perspective being off. This is a photograph of your painting, which may distort the perspective slightly. I'd like to see the painting itself before suggesting changes. Based on the photo, I really like the painting.
billmahler

Posts:167

11/24/2007 7:18 AM Alert 
I like this one as is.
I'd frame and start another.

..send ye not therefore to know for whom the bell tolls- it tolls for thee. John Donne
SunsetSue

Posts:111

11/25/2007 8:32 PM Alert 
Della this is a lovely scene. I particularily like the sky and birds. Your colors are good and you have movement in the water. I bet it will look nice framed.
Sue
Deedee

Posts:34

12/01/2007 5:39 PM Alert 

Hello All

 Thank you  for your c& c .  I really appreciate the feedback. I sent a pic to my Daughter and she loves snow scenes ,so suggested I add some to the scene. This is the results ..If she likes this version I wil get it framed for her for Christmas.

Della







Della
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