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saviorelmundo

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11/20/2007 6:55 PM	Alert
ok, so this is nerveracking but below is a piece of abstract art that i recently created and I would like anyones critiques on it! Hope it serves you well... Thanks! Savior... If you do like it, let me know with your information and i will send you an invite for the April show in NYC.

Kim
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11/25/2007 9:37 PM	Alert
If I lived in NYC I would definitely attend your show. I don't feel qualified to critique abstract, but for whatever it's worth, I really like this. The center draws my eye first because it's void of the yellow, but then I'm drawn to explore the rest. There's a lot of rhythm in the paint, but it's pleasantly not repetitious. I think it's very well balanced. I hope you do well with your show.

arl
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11/27/2007 9:15 AM	Alert
I too don't feel qualified to comment on abstract art but I like this particularly the yellows through the painting. Arlene

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jdean

Posts:27

12/07/2007 4:04 AM	Alert
I dunno. I just like it. Hang it on my wall I would. Cheers! Does it have all kinds of texture too?

one who sees

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12/07/2007 9:49 AM	Alert
in effect abstract art contains everythng that is necessary in realism, except the realism...hehe...you need composition, perspective, and contrasting values..... i do like this in that it keeps the eye traveling around it...the bits of yellow redirecting us here and there... the one thing i would suggest is to pop it into greyscale when your creating your paintings to see if there is a interesting value range.....i do think this has all the elements, but just keep an eye on values a bit... i am not close enough to ya to visit your show, but best wishes on it being very successful! i see no reason why it wont be!!!!

~I am always doing what I cannot do yet, in order to learn how to do it~ Vincent Van Gogh www.bettyannlemist.com

saviorelmundo

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01/04/2008 3:27 PM	Alert
thank you all for your comments. the painting has several textures yes, its very heavy for its size. the grey tone suggestion is interesting. i think i will pay some attention to that! yes....

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