I've tried to listen and learn, this is my new version. The grass has been made less strident, and a little more green. I really think it's an improvement. I want to thank you all again, and now I need to know if I really improved this piece based on your comments.

I just love this.

Burt

I knew that there was something not quite right. Having such good critics is a joy and a learning experience. I love it, and this painting is back on the easel for remediation. I'll repost it after I make some changes, and you can tell me if I got it right.

Thankyou both

Burt

I love the colours and the feel of autumn. I did think that edges of the mountain shape in the background were somewhat hard. Arlene Babad

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Hi Arl

I reposted this work with some changes, but too late to incorporate your suggestion. Perhaps I will get to it. If not, Thanks for your kind comments, and suggestions.

Burt

I had an exhibit in Lexington Ma. and one orf the other exhibitors told me about this site. www.etsy.com. it looks like a good place to post work. I have a personal address, www.burtkenty.etsy.com and I have posted several paintings. I think this is an opportunity address for very little $.

Thanks for the kind comments

Burt

Right next to Kezar Falls? And over the border to Freedom? I used to live there and if I had my way (and finances) I'd live there again.

Yes the colors are great. I'm timid about color but much study is helping. Any groups up there to get involved with? I find them motivating.

Jane

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