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Subject: Garlic - First CP

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Kim
Posts:383

02/04/2008 12:21 PM Alert 

It was only a matter of time before I would get the nerve to try this.  I've been watching the beautiful pastels and wondering if I could switch gears from oil.  Then seeing and hearing about colored pencil, well...I figured I would give it a try. 

So for my birthday, I bought myself a tin of 36 colored pencils and took a few days off to re-juice with some creative projects.  

12x9, Prismacolor, 98 lb pastel paper by Canson (Mi-Teintes)  It didn't occur to me that the tin didn't contain any grays, so I improvised with indigo and violet. 

I would REALLY like to hear your comments.  Overall, I'm pleased with this first attempt.  (I'm not sure that I even mind the pod that looks like an expired jellyfish!)   My observation is that the paper may be slightly too textured for blending.  But maybe that's a process that takes time. Also, does anyone use the Verithin pencil and do they help a lot?  And the Prismacolor blender?

 






freeflow_23

Posts:13

02/05/2008 10:06 AM Alert 
Hey Kim. Garlic is a great idea for a subject. I'll have to try that one myself.

The first thing that popped into my head was "Wow. That still would look really great on a black background."
I envision the composition a little closer in and more at eye level to really capture the detail of the garlic.
IMO the horizontal line in the background takes away from the subject.

I think it's really good for a first color pencil attempt. The color shading could probably be a little more sutle in order to keep that pure white on the highlights.

I have a small set of Verithin pencils but have not used them yet. I usually just sharpen my Prismacolors to get fine detail.

Thanks for sharing and keep it up.

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gbritnell
Posts:38

02/05/2008 10:27 AM Alert 

Hi Kim, I agree with Brian. The composition could have focused on the garlic, making them a little larger. Also, the horizon line that you have almost cuts the work exactly in half. You should try to offset this the next time. As far as the paper, it is very rough because it's basically for pastels but it depends on the effect you're going for. Some people like smoother and others like a rougher texture, that's up to you. I have only used Verithins once or twice. They don't have the softness and blending qualities that the Prismacolors have so I rarely use them. Keep at it and show us more when you get some.

gbritnell

Kim
Posts:383

02/07/2008 8:35 PM Alert 
Thank you both for responding. You bring up good points and are quite encouraging. As for the horizontal line, I had pretty much ignored it, concentrating on the pods. I did a set up in a box with a lamp to highlight, which is where the line came from - used it mostly for reference. I'm glad you mentioned it so that I will pay more attention next time.
Brian, I hope to find some black paper and do another drawing per your suggestions.
Gbritnell, thanks also for your input on the pencils.
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