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Subject: Technical Flaws?

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jdean

Posts:27

12/22/2007 3:17 PM Alert 
I've browsed the internet to try to find some type of clarification by what is meant by a painting's "technical flaws," (mentioned quite a bit without clarification on websites where competition entry winners and losers are discussed). I haven't been able to find anything other than what common sense would tell you - ill-stretched canvas or cracking paint - that type of thing.

Circles and Squares (See attached photo showing a detail of the painting posted in 'Art Clinic' taken before it was finished.)

My burning question is this... when I paint, I often use my finger to help with shading, wiping paint away from the canvas surface to blend or lessen the intensity of the color I'm applying, (the blue squares). Now, I'm relatively certain this isn't a 'technical flaw,' but what about where a semi-transparent paint is applied and it doesn't quite cover, like in the red semi-circle at the bottom, within the red circles, or along the geese's back just below the red line.

I've corrected some of these areas in paintings but sometimes the resulting solid-color shapes don't look right and the painting seems to take on a 'posterized' effect.

Am I using good painting techniques or are we talking technical flaws here?

(The arrow points to a pencil line drawn so I could get good placement and a line to follow for the neck... also apparent in some of the roughishness of the beak.)

Lacking formal training, I sure would appreciate some help with this.

Cheers!

Jeff






jdean

Posts:27

12/22/2007 3:30 PM Alert 
P.S. Sorry... the red semi-circle no longer shows - cut-off when I had to resize the photo for posting.
MSHa
Posts:12

01/30/2008 10:24 PM Alert 
I am inclined to think it would be, inaccurate perspective, inconsistant lighting, even proportion scale.  Along with the elements of design being out of whack.  Don't know for sure, just a guess.
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