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Subject: copper brass and silver

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LMP01

Posts:131

05/19/2008 10:53 PM Alert 

 Please critique my work.  It's 14x17 and done with prisma cps on vellum bristol paper. Thank you.







Lennie
Kassie

Posts:194

05/19/2008 11:33 PM Alert 
My first impression is that it is very shiney--brillient, I would say. The brass is kind of yellow. It could be a combination of things caused by your jpg.
It shows a great deal of good work on the drawing. The bowl of the copper pot could be a little more eliptical. It's an interesting combination for a still life and would be even better if you could make it sit back further in the picture.
Kassie
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