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jan2150
Posts:35
04/29/2008 8:23 AM Alert 

This is a watercolor of a doodle on 140lb Arches Watercolor paper, it is 12 X 16.  It is an customized original painting taken from a photo.

Thanks of looking!  I would love to know what I need to do to continue my growth as a artist.  I love doing Pet Portraits.

Jan

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Jan Hackett
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Posts:8
05/02/2008 9:50 AM Alert 
Well, as no one has posted, I will!

Darling dog. A suggestion I'd make is to soften the areas around the nose and mouth, bringing some hair softly around them. The highlight on the mouth looks like a tongue so I'd deaden that highlight also. As it is, the nose and mouth attract too much attention and steal the focus from those beautifully painted eyes.
jan2150
Posts:35
05/16/2008 1:58 PM Alert 
Thank you for your suggestions. Looking at it now I do agree. Thanks I will continue to work on it making improvements. Thanks!
Jan Hackett
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