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Subject: Request Critique / Oil Painting

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Materese
Posts:123
04/01/2007 8:30 PM Alert 
Title: Still LIfe with Terra Cotta Size: 12 x 16 Medium: Oil on Linen I'm looking to improve my work, especially in compostion and design. My thanks for your time!





Materese
http://www.ghostwoodstudio.com
klippie

Posts:1867
04/13/2007 4:02 PM Alert 
Materese,

This is a very good painting.
only thing that bothers me is the crack goiing right to the pear.
sort of distracting.

Retha
If at first you dont succeed.........don't ever give up!
Tori
Posts:4
09/03/2008 8:56 PM Alert 
I agree with Retha - the crack ending at the pear stem is distracting. Fruit is very well rendered and feels life-like... the jar is a bit flat with the shadow on the right looking too harsh. Also, might be more interesting to mingle the wine colors up into the jar and pears a bit... and
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