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Cindy2008
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| 09/02/2008 7:52 PM |
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| I live in New England. I started as a photographer and wanted to try my hand at painting. Any comments? |
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jAlida
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| 09/17/2008 9:20 PM |
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| Good sense of movement. I like your colors. It looks like the Northern Lights. Oil? Pastel? |
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Cindy2008
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| 09/19/2008 5:44 PM |
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| Thank you for your comment. This is an oil painting 16x20. It was my first try with moving water. I am currently working on an underwater portion of a stream, it's not easy. |
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Kassie
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| 09/19/2008 10:03 PM |
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Don't forget to come up for air. Ha Ha! It sounds you like painting water. This painting sounds like it will be interesting. Don't forget to post under Media -- Oil.
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Jeanette
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| 10/08/2008 7:44 PM |
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| You have a good sense of color..Maybe if the wave breaking on the front rock was larger, CRASHED upon the rock, and back to the ocean, it would help lead the eye back to the mid of the painting, plus would have been the focal point, without loosing the painting..Especially if you could keep some of that great pthalo-ocean color you have going on, splashing up, before the waves white crest takes over....I also feel the background cliff needs to be lighter, whether grey, or the browns you have..To push it back into the painting..I would suggest grey, keep with the theme..and the wave crashing off it, needs to be crashing off to the left of the cliff, for perspective, and maybe smaller in size, perspective..I hope I don't offend, or disuade, I know You asked for comments, and I hope I gave helpful ones! Jeanette (PS Yes, I ramble ;-} ) |
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