Artist's Marketplacee
Saturday, November 21, 2009 Register | Login
     
 
Artists Network
Forums > Gallery/Topic by Medium > Watercolor & Gouache
Subject: Update-Gramma's Poppies

You are not authorized to post a reply.   
Author Messages
teenyblue79

Posts:140
09/09/2009 3:39 PM Alert 
Well, here is the update. Please feel free to critique this one also as it really helps me to grow as an artist. I like the feedback... Nina





Perfection is attained by slow degrees;
she requires the hand of time-Voltaire
ohsuzanna

Posts:274
09/10/2009 8:59 PM Alert 
I think if you could have posted the before and after pic's at the same time it would be easier for everone to see the differences. now that I went to your first posting and back to this one I can see the difference.

This looks much better. Great job!
Kassie

Posts:721
09/12/2009 12:09 PM Alert 
To do what Suzanne said you can go into edit to add your newest picture. Anyhooow! It is becoming very detailed. Would suggest that the grass behind the sheet ( By the way shadows in the sheet are an improvement. Could be lighter.) have various wash tones throughout the ground. Something like you did in the foreground.
Keep up the good work.
Kathy
teenyblue79

Posts:140
09/12/2009 12:38 PM Alert 
Thank you, Suzanna and Kathy, for your comments. I will certainly go back to the first thread and add the updated picture on that also for those who want to compare. Don't know why I didn't think of it myself-doh.
Lol. Guess I was in a hurry. Will remember your tips as I plan to redraw this scene in the future....Nina
Perfection is attained by slow degrees;
she requires the hand of time-Voltaire
You are not authorized to post a reply.
Forums > Gallery/Topic by Medium > Watercolor & Gouache > Update-Gramma's Poppies


ActiveForums 3.6