After this weekend, i'm slowly getting impatient with watercolors.  I know practice makes perfect, these are my second and third watercolors.

The first is a P-80 shooting star on 140lbs lana 10x14

The second is a bf-109 Messerschmitt 140lbs lana 4x6

any critiqueing is appreciated.  I already know where I can improve, and have spotted several mistakes already, but please dont hesitate to tell me what you think.

thanks

kylep

p.s. I need to hook my scanner up.

Hi, I used the complete guide to fighters and bombers, yeah I know about the size proportions on the exhaust on the P-80, getting the proportions down and learning the shapes of planes features have been one of the more challenging things for me to get a grasp on.  Yes the P-80 canopy is backwards but in the actual photo I have its got that line there, I dont know if this is just the back area behind the pilots seat or a strange angle for me to see it, anyways its not  a great representation of the photo, only my second and third watercolors.

Thanks

kylep