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Sky_1962
Posts:20

07/16/2007 1:53 AM Alert 

Hi everyone!

Just enother of my work.

Thank you for coomments

 

Sergey 






sandeep.khedkar
Posts:439

07/16/2007 2:13 AM Alert 
Hi Sergey
You have captured the essence of the painting very well. I like your style. Simple yet effective!
Sandeep
klippie

Posts:1938

07/20/2007 3:04 AM Alert 
Nice

Retha

If at first you dont succeed.........don't ever give up!
LMB

Posts:470

07/20/2007 6:42 AM Alert 
Hi Sergey,
This is very nice!
Leon

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quand le coeur est dans un bon endroit tout est possible
when the heart is in a good place all is possible
Sky_1962
Posts:20

07/20/2007 11:22 AM Alert 

Thank you all!

You know.. Here, in my town people don't often  take note of painting.. Actually I don't know I'm on a right way or not.. Your attention and your  comments are invaluable.

Thank you!

Sergey

gene
Posts:1246

07/21/2007 8:19 AM Alert 
Here is just a very simple suggestion that I think would improve your painting. The spot in the sky where the darker blue meets the light cloud is much too hard of an edge in my opinion. If I were you, I would use a moistened brush and a paper towel and very gently dab at that edge and then blot the color off, very lightly. I think the soft edge would be much more effective in the sky...........Just my idea, look at it and see if you agree..................Gene
wee watercolorist
Posts:1

07/22/2007 1:16 AM Alert 

I'm very picky regarding my watercolors..I like yours a lot.

I teach a loose method and not at all bothered a bit about the sky.  Fresh, painterly and well done.

wee watercolorist

aliceag
Posts:3

08/24/2007 11:09 AM Alert 
I love the abstract quality of this painting. I agree with the hard edge in the sky and think that you can soften it a little. Good work!
jcbarb
Posts:63

08/24/2007 2:33 PM Alert 
This is a wonderful painting - the sky is one of the strongest elements in this painting, in my opinion.
Barb
Consuelo Moros
Posts:1

09/30/2007 8:36 AM Alert 

Hello From Caracas Venezuela, I like very much your painting, congratulations.

Consuelo Moros

www.cmoros.galeon.com


connie
Posts:445

10/04/2007 12:39 PM Alert 
I agree with Gene, or dab the strong blue line with a moist paper towel so the edge has a softer blend.
The image looks like it could have been developed into a bird?
bluiiz
Posts:532

10/05/2007 7:12 AM Alert 
Sergey, there is a wonderful "feeling" in your painting, which I think is so key to a painting, and really I think more important than anything. I hope you just keep on expressing yourself. I didn't even notice the hard edge until I read here, because my first reaction was I liked that bright contrast to the strong line, I don't think you are trying to make it realistic, I just sense a time of day, temperature, the same feeling I feel when I see the real thing... best of luck!

Anna
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