I find the painting technically quite good, namely the lighting and its movement.
But I guess that I know what you mean. See if you agree with me.
This painting is about family : the mother and her children ( I guess it's a baby's car ?).
However you've portrayed them too small in relation with the rest of the scene ( of course that the ratio is correct), but what I mean is that the "camera" should had zoomed more onto the characters.
This way it gives a certain sensation of lost in the scenery.
Also the fact that there's a sensation of long way to walk due to the perspective, probably doesn't help much
Sorry for this down to earth critique, but I try to help as best as I can.
Otherwise I think it's a good painting.
What do you think ?
I've taken the liberty of cropping the image to see if it looks better.
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