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Subject: Mokuleia Bay

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Mike Major

Posts:195

10/19/2007 12:23 AM Alert 
Hey there,  I hope everyone is doing well.  Please let me know what you think.  Thanks Mike






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pastelmimigt

Posts:373

10/19/2007 12:49 PM Alert 
Nice job. Beautiful colors. The higher rocks may look more realistic if you make them more jagged. It makes sense that the ones in the water are smooth, but higher up I think harder edges would look better. And, they are very uniform in a lot of places and maybe too busy. Also, I think getting the beautiful aqua color on the lower left to spread out and cross-reference a bit more would look good as the color change right now is a bit abrupt. Beautiful - the eyes really travels all around this painting.
jason

Posts:107

10/19/2007 4:38 PM Alert 
Stunning- unique style-you should be giving workshops- Jason

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Mike Major

Posts:195

10/20/2007 8:12 PM Alert 
Michele-I think you are right in both cases. Jason that is very kind of you to say. Thanks Mike

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