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scochran Posts:208
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| 10/02/2007 2:57 PM |
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| Having fun doing the little fairy. Don't have think too hard, just enjoy the idea. Please give me any input you have. I still want to grow as an artist. Thank you, scochran |

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connie Posts:445
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| 10/02/2007 3:50 PM |
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These seem to separate images with an image with different mediums. Nice images for a childrens book. |
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Snowartist
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| 10/02/2007 5:26 PM |
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| This is very nice. Composition is nice,, and the whole idea is interesting. |
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Ajam Posts:24
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| 10/03/2007 8:50 PM |
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The fairy's body proportions are excellent. Ajam |
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gene Posts:1245
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| 10/04/2007 9:24 AM |
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| I would like to offer a bit of critique. It looks like the fairy, (especially the wings), and the birds are pasted on to the background. I think if you would soften the edges in various places, you would get a better effect of those elements being part of the whole piece. Do you see what I mean? Also, I feel that the wings could be a bit more transparent-looking. I agree with Ajam, you have the fairy's body drawn very nicely, except that her arms seem a bit long for the size of her legs to me. Just a thought...........I could be wrong. Gene |
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Jim
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| 10/04/2007 7:40 PM |
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I like the overall affect here. It's just the wings that I have a problem with. They just don't seem to be very well defined. They distract from the rest of your painting. A lighter touch, just a hint of outline might work better. Jim
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All the best, Jim
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klippie
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| 10/04/2007 11:22 PM |
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schocran
I actually like it just as it is, good work.
Just watch your light, I mean that it is coming from the same direction on the birds and fairy etc...
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