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Subject: dancing fairy

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scochran
Posts:208

10/02/2007 2:57 PM Alert 
Having fun doing the little fairy. Don't have think too hard, just enjoy the idea. Please give me any input you have. I still want to grow as an artist. Thank you, scochran






shana cochran
connie
Posts:445

10/02/2007 3:50 PM Alert 
These seem to separate images with an image
with different mediums.
Nice images for a childrens book.
Snowartist

Posts:196

10/02/2007 5:26 PM Alert 
This is very nice. Composition is nice,, and the whole idea is interesting.
Ajam
Posts:24

10/03/2007 8:50 PM Alert 
The fairy's body proportions are excellent.
Ajam
gene
Posts:1245

10/04/2007 9:24 AM Alert 
I would like to offer a bit of critique. It looks like the fairy, (especially the wings), and the birds are pasted on to the background. I think if you would soften the edges in various places, you would get a better effect of those elements being part of the whole piece. Do you see what I mean? Also, I feel that the wings could be a bit more transparent-looking. I agree with Ajam, you have the fairy's body drawn very nicely, except that her arms seem a bit long for the size of her legs to me. Just a thought...........I could be wrong. Gene
Jim

Posts:2337

10/04/2007 7:40 PM Alert 
I like the overall affect here. It's just the wings that I have a problem with.
They just don't seem to be very well defined. They distract from the rest of
your painting. A lighter touch, just a hint of outline might work better.
Jim

www.paintingsbyjim.com

All the best,
Jim

www.paintingsbyjim.com
klippie

Posts:1880

10/04/2007 11:22 PM Alert 
schocran

I actually like it just as it is, good work.

Just watch your light,
I mean that it is coming from the same direction on the birds and fairy etc...

Retha

If at first you dont succeed.........don't ever give up!
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