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Subject: Sun Worshipper

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mksarts
Posts:98
04/09/2007 11:53 AM Alert 

not sure if she's done- i think close, maybe with the addition of some whiskers?

what do you think?





marianne
sboyko
Posts:55
04/10/2007 8:31 PM Alert 
You're close to done, I think. I like the way you massed the cat in , and I like the glow of the light on the top planes of the fur. The color is good, and I like the richness of the background. The green and red works very well.. The only suggestions I might make are to darken the values under the cat and the foreground table edge and to make its back foot maybe stick out a little more so it's not such a straight line down there. The muzzle is maybe a little bright , or maybe the light part of the muzzle is a little large -the edges of the muzzle are very sharp, you might soften the edges around the muzzle. Great ears. Definitely do some whiskers,make them stick out in front a little, too. I like this cat a lot. Very direct, good confident work.
heatherm

Posts:2120
04/11/2007 4:43 PM Alert 
Very good so far, definitely add those whiskers. I would darken the shadows a little more to emphasize the impression the body is solid. I agree the back paw is a little high and should be brought down. The muzzle is a little large, bring the bottom of it up a little and fuzz the edges of it with the fur texture. A sharp highlight in the eye will make it pop. I also agree with darkening the values on the table edge facing the viewer. This is a beautiful cat, and you have made it glow. I want to cuddle it. My cat has that expression when she is looking out the window, ready to pounce. Please repost when you are finished, would love to see it.
Heather

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